Re: [Lsr] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

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Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis
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Speaking as WG member, I support publication. I've attached an rfcdiff with RFC 5313 to aid others in their review. 

I have the following editorial comments on the changed lines:

*** draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis-00.txt.orig	Thu Feb 18 13:58:31 2021
--- draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis-00.txt	Thu Feb 18 14:20:54 2021
***************
*** 519,525 ****
               11        4   IPv4 TE Router ID
               12       16   IPv6 TE Router ID
  
!    Detailed definitions of the new sub-TLV are described in
     Section 3.4.1 and 3.4.2.
  
  3.3.  Sub-TLVs for Inter-AS Reachability TLV
--- 519,525 ----
               11        4   IPv4 TE Router ID
               12       16   IPv6 TE Router ID
  
!    Detailed definitions of the new sub-TLVs are described in
     Section 3.4.1 and 3.4.2.
  
  3.3.  Sub-TLVs for Inter-AS Reachability TLV
***************
*** 905,911 ****
  
  6.1.  Inter-AS Reachability TLV
  
!    This document defines the following new ISI-IS TLV type, described in
     Section 3.1, which has been registered in the IS-IS TLV codepoint
     registry:
  
--- 905,911 ----
  
  6.1.  Inter-AS Reachability TLV
  
!    This document defines the following IS-IS TLV type, described in
     Section 3.1, which has been registered in the IS-IS TLV codepoint
     registry:
  
***************
*** 936,942 ****
  
     As described above in Section 3.1, the sub-TLVs which are defined in
     [RFC5305], [RFC6119] and other documents for describing the TE
!    properties of an TE link are applicable to describe an inter-AS TE
     link and MAY be included in the inter-AS reachability TLV when
     adverting inter-AS TE links.
  
--- 936,942 ----
  
     As described above in Section 3.1, the sub-TLVs which are defined in
     [RFC5305], [RFC6119] and other documents for describing the TE
!    properties of a TE link are applicable to describe an inter-AS TE
     link and MAY be included in the inter-AS reachability TLV when
     adverting inter-AS TE links.
 
Thanks,
Acee

On 2/17/21, 10:31 AM, "Christian Hopps" <chopps@chopps.org> wrote:

    Hi LSR and TEAS,

    This begins a joint WG last call for:

      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis/

    Please discuss any issues on the LSR mailing list. The WGLC will end March 3, 2021.

    Authors, please indicate wether you are aware of any IPR related to this document to the list.

    Thanks,
    Chris, Acee, (Lou and Pavan).