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Re: [Lsr] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Thu, 18 February 2021 23:06 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>
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Acee -



Thanx for your - as always - meticulous review. I have posted an updated version incorporating your comments.



Have you considered adding yourself to the IDNITs check?  😊



   Les



> -----Original Message-----

> From: Lsr <lsr-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Acee Lindem (acee)

> Sent: Thursday, February 18, 2021 11:24 AM

> To: Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>; lsr@ietf.org

> Cc: lsr-chairs@ietf.org; lsr-ads@ietf.org; teas-chairs@ietf.org; teas-

> ads@ietf.org; teas@ietf.org

> Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

>

> Speaking as WG member, I support publication. I've attached an rfcdiff with

> RFC 5313 to aid others in their review.

>

> I have the following editorial comments on the changed lines:

>

> *** draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis-00.txt.orig       Thu Feb 18 13:58:31 2021

> --- draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis-00.txt   Thu Feb 18 14:20:54 2021

> ***************

> *** 519,525 ****

>                11        4   IPv4 TE Router ID

>                12       16   IPv6 TE Router ID

>

> !    Detailed definitions of the new sub-TLV are described in

>      Section 3.4.1 and 3.4.2.

>

>   3.3.  Sub-TLVs for Inter-AS Reachability TLV

> --- 519,525 ----

>                11        4   IPv4 TE Router ID

>                12       16   IPv6 TE Router ID

>

> !    Detailed definitions of the new sub-TLVs are described in

>      Section 3.4.1 and 3.4.2.

>

>   3.3.  Sub-TLVs for Inter-AS Reachability TLV

> ***************

> *** 905,911 ****

>

>   6.1.  Inter-AS Reachability TLV

>

> !    This document defines the following new ISI-IS TLV type, described in

>      Section 3.1, which has been registered in the IS-IS TLV codepoint

>      registry:

>

> --- 905,911 ----

>

>   6.1.  Inter-AS Reachability TLV

>

> !    This document defines the following IS-IS TLV type, described in

>      Section 3.1, which has been registered in the IS-IS TLV codepoint

>      registry:

>

> ***************

> *** 936,942 ****

>

>      As described above in Section 3.1, the sub-TLVs which are defined in

>      [RFC5305], [RFC6119] and other documents for describing the TE

> !    properties of an TE link are applicable to describe an inter-AS TE

>      link and MAY be included in the inter-AS reachability TLV when

>      adverting inter-AS TE links.

>

> --- 936,942 ----

>

>      As described above in Section 3.1, the sub-TLVs which are defined in

>      [RFC5305], [RFC6119] and other documents for describing the TE

> !    properties of a TE link are applicable to describe an inter-AS TE

>      link and MAY be included in the inter-AS reachability TLV when

>      adverting inter-AS TE links.

>

> Thanks,

> Acee

>

> On 2/17/21, 10:31 AM, "Christian Hopps" <chopps@chopps.org<mailto:chopps@chopps.org>> wrote:

>

>     Hi LSR and TEAS,

>

>     This begins a joint WG last call for:

>

>       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis/

>

>     Please discuss any issues on the LSR mailing list. The WGLC will end March

> 3, 2021.

>

>     Authors, please indicate wether you are aware of any IPR related to this

> document to the list.

>

>     Thanks,

>     Chris, Acee, (Lou and Pavan).

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