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Re: [Mtgvenue] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-04.txt

Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net> Thu, 29 December 2016 15:53 UTC

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G'day,


On 12/29/2016 7:44 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Meeting Venue  of the IETF.
...
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-04.txt



Changes include:
>       Various clarifying bits to provide some glue between the
>       high-level 'objectives' and the detailed criteria and roles, per
>       suggestions from Lear.  Editorial changes, per 12/27 response to
>       Cooper.  Refined uses of 'facility' and 'venue', per 12/4 response

as well as improved "Consultation" text from Berger.


On the use of 'facility' and 'venue':

      Please do look over their occurrences and see whether this version 
makes these references clearer.


d/

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   Dave Crocker
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