Re: [Netconf] ????WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-tls-04.txt

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Tue, 30 September 2008 17:54 UTC

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From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
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On Tue, Sep 30, 2008 at 07:41:09PM +0200, badra@isima.fr wrote:
 
> No problem. What about:
>     "The application statement and the benefits of using the pre-shared
>      key based authentication have been explained in the Introduction of
>      [RFC4279]".

Or:

  "For details concerning pre-shared key based authentication see
  [RFC4279]".

Less is more.

/js

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