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[Netconf] Re:  WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-tls-04 .txt

badra@isima.fr Tue, 30 September 2008 18:15 UTC

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Subject: [Netconf] Re:  WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-tls-04 .txt
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>> No problem. What about:
>>     "The application statement and the benefits of using the pre-shared
>>      key based authentication have been explained in the Introduction of
>>      [RFC4279]".
>
> Or:
>
>   "For details concerning pre-shared key based authentication see
>   [RFC4279]".
>
> Less is more.
>
> /js


OK. I will insert this sentence at the end of 1st paragraph, Section 3

Thanks.
Best regards
Badra
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