Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Thu, 08 April 2021 21:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt
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Thanks Jeff,

Yes, I culled some text from the NMRG draft and tweaked it a little. Would surely appreciate your review of those few paragraphs.

Best,
Adrian

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt

Adrian,

I owe the IBN text, will contribute in a couple of days. Or you could use text from draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-concepts-definitions-03, we are in RG LC.


Regards,
Jeff

> On Apr 7, 2021, at 12:24, Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> wrote:
> 
> With this version I have filled in the remaining TBDs:
> - small section on intent-based network
> - small section on multi-layer TE (thanks, Lou, for the suggestion)
> - change log from 3272
> 
> As far as I'm concerned this document is complete modulo review comments.
> 
> It *really* needs review, but I can't force you!
> Maybe you can look at the sections of special interest to you?
> Maybe the original Design Team could take another look?
> 
> Otherwise: time for WG last call?
> 
> Thanks,
> Adrian
> 
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
> Signaling WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic
> Engineering
>        Author          : Adrian Farrel
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt
>    Pages           : 91
>    Date            : 2021-04-07
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes the principles of traffic engineering (TE) in
>   the Internet.  The document is intended to promote better
>   understanding of the issues surrounding traffic engineering in IP
>   networks and the networks that support IP networking, and to provide
>   a common basis for the development of traffic engineering
>   capabilities for the Internet.  The principles, architectures, and
>   methodologies for performance evaluation and performance optimization
>   of operational networks are also discussed.
> 
>   This work was first published as RFC 3272 in May 2002.  This document
>   obsoletes RFC 3272 by making a complete update to bring the text in
>   line with best current practices for Internet traffic engineering and
>   to include references to the latest relevant work in the IETF.
> 
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> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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