Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Wed, 05 May 2021 18:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt
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Thanks Med,

I'm working on this now.

Imagine, hithub as a way of  exchanging a PDF version of Word mark-up
document :-)

Best,
Adrian
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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> 
Sent: 03 May 2021 15:49
To: adrian@olddog.co.uk; teas@ietf.org
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Subject: RE: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt

Hi Adrian, all, 

FWIW, you may find some comments at:
* pdf:
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-teas
-rfc3272bis-11-rev%20Med.pdf 
* doc:
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-teas-
rfc3272bis-11-rev%20Med.docx  

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Teas [mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Adrian Farrel
> Envoyé : mercredi 7 avril 2021 21:24
> À : teas@ietf.org
> Cc : 'TEAS WG Chairs' <teas-chairs@ietf.org>
> Objet : Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt
> 
> With this version I have filled in the remaining TBDs:
> - small section on intent-based network
> - small section on multi-layer TE (thanks, Lou, for the suggestion)
> - change log from 3272
> 
> As far as I'm concerned this document is complete modulo review
> comments.
> 
> It *really* needs review, but I can't force you!
> Maybe you can look at the sections of special interest to you?
> Maybe the original Design Team could take another look?
> 
> Otherwise: time for WG last call?
> 
> Thanks,
> Adrian
> 
> -----Original Message-----
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> internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Sent: 07 April 2021 19:25
> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> Cc: teas@ietf.org
> Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
> Signaling WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic
> Engineering
>         Author          : Adrian Farrel
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11.txt
> 	Pages           : 91
> 	Date            : 2021-04-07
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the principles of traffic engineering (TE)
> in
>    the Internet.  The document is intended to promote better
>    understanding of the issues surrounding traffic engineering in IP
>    networks and the networks that support IP networking, and to
> provide
>    a common basis for the development of traffic engineering
>    capabilities for the Internet.  The principles, architectures, and
>    methodologies for performance evaluation and performance
> optimization
>    of operational networks are also discussed.
> 
>    This work was first published as RFC 3272 in May 2002.  This
> document
>    obsoletes RFC 3272 by making a complete update to bring the text
> in
>    line with best current practices for Internet traffic engineering
> and
>    to include references to the latest relevant work in the IETF.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-11
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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