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Re: [auth48] [C336] [AD] RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9299 <draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-15> for your review

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 15 September 2022 13:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [C336] [AD] RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9299 <draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-15> for your review
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On September 14, 2022 at 8:37:07 PM, Alanna Paloma wrote:


Alanna:

Hi!

> *Alvaro, as the AD, please review and approve the changes to the text in
> Section 6 in the diff file below.
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9299-auth48diff.html

It seems to me that too much was cut:

Original>
   When signaling is used to create multicast state at the sites, LISP
   routers unicast encapsulate PIM Join/Prune messages from receiver
   to source sites.

Current>
   When signaling is used to create multicast state at the sites, LISP
   routers encapsulate as unicast packets.


We lost the contents of the encapsulation:

New>
   When signaling is used to create multicast state at the sites, LISP
   routers encapsulate PIM Join/Prune messages from receiver to source
   sites as unicast packets.

We may also be able to cut "from receiver to source sites".



Other than this, the document looks good to me.  I approve the publication.


Thanks!

Alvaro.

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