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Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-08

"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Wed, 12 October 2022 11:28 UTC

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From: "Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Oct 2022 07:27:11 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-08
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I've read the draft and support publication.

I have one small editorial comment. Section 7 begins with the word "
Additionally", which refers to text preceding the word that was removed
back in revision -02. I recommend removing the word "Additionally" from the
beginning of the sentence.

Cheers,
Andy


On Tue, Oct 11, 2022 at 10:22 AM Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas=
40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> All,
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> This starts working group last call on
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam/
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> The working group last call ends on October 25th.
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> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
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> No IPR has been disclosed against this document.
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> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is
> ready for publication", are welcome!
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> This is useful and important, even from authors.
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> Thank you,
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> János (DetNet Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)
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