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Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-08

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Wed, 12 October 2022 15:52 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Oct 2022 08:51:56 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-08
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Hi Andy,
thank you for your review. I agree with the proposed update and have
applied it to the working version of the draft.

Regards,
Greg

On Wed, Oct 12, 2022 at 4:28 AM Andrew G. Malis <agmalis@gmail.com> wrote:

> I've read the draft and support publication.
>
> I have one small editorial comment. Section 7 begins with the word "
> Additionally", which refers to text preceding the word that was removed
> back in revision -02. I recommend removing the word "Additionally" from
> the beginning of the sentence.
>
> Cheers,
> Andy
>
>
> On Tue, Oct 11, 2022 at 10:22 AM Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas=
> 40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
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>> All,
>>
>>
>>
>> This starts working group last call on
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam/
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>>
>>
>> The working group last call ends on October 25th.
>>
>> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
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>> No IPR has been disclosed against this document.
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>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is
>> ready for publication", are welcome!
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>> This is useful and important, even from authors.
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>>
>> Thank you,
>>
>> János (DetNet Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)
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