Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-08

I have read the document and though I can't comment on the technical
details of OAM or MPLS I find the document is basically readable and
understandable. I have a few minor comments on grammar and spelling - I
suppose such things can be left to Editorial (and at a certain point I
figured I would stop doing this and let Editorial handle it) but you'll
have to deal with them eventually. Below are the first few that I noticed.
Ethan.
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Was: "This document defines format and use principals of the Deterministic
Network (DetNet)"
Spelling - should be "...use principles..."

Was "Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) protocols are used
   to detect, localize defects in the network, and monitor network
   performance."
Grammar: How about "Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM)
protocols are used
   to detect and localize defects in the network, and to monitor network
   performance."

Was: "Some OAM functions, e.g., failure detection, work in the network
proactively, while others, e.g., defect localization,
   usually performed on-demand."
Grammar, maybe "Some OAM functions (e.g., failure detection) are usually
performed proactively in the network, while others (e.g., defect
localization) are usually performed on demand."

Was "format and use principals"
Spelling: "principles"

Was: "Janos Farcas"
Spelling "Farkas"
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On Tue, Oct 11, 2022 at 7:22 AM Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas=
40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> All,
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> This starts working group last call on
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam/
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> The working group last call ends on October 25th.
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> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
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> No IPR has been disclosed against this document.
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> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is
> ready for publication", are welcome!
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> This is useful and important, even from authors.
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> Thank you,
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> János (DetNet Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)
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