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Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Tue, 12 June 2018 22:45 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
To: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>, "alex@clemm.org" <alex@clemm.org>
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>> Sure, but can YP import the "Event Record" term from SN?
>>
>> Sure.  It imports other terms.  Alex, do you want to bring it in?
>> 
>> Also, I think that the definition could be improved.  It currently reads:
>> 
>>    Event record: A set of information detailing an event.
>
> Yes.  But the word 'event' here is itself defined as:
>
>   Event: An occurrence of something that may be of interest.  Examples
>   include a configuration change, a fault, a change in status, crossing
>   a threshold, or an external input to the system.
>
>Reviewers have liked separation of the event itself from the record about it.


I'm okay with separation.  On one hand, it seems like common English, but
it might be good to have it well-defined in this draft.  Still it seems 
that the definition could be improved, maybe by contrasting it to an event?
One is the what happened, the other a record about what happened...

Kent // contributor

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