Re: [Netconf] comments on draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-12

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> Wed, 13 June 2018 15:56 UTC

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From: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>, "alex@clemm.org" <alex@clemm.org>
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] comments on draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-12
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
> Sent: Tuesday, June 12, 2018 6:45 PM
> To: Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com>; Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>;
> alex@clemm.org
> Cc: netconf@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Netconf] comments on draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-
> notifications-12
> 
> 
> 
> 
> >> Sure, but can YP import the "Event Record" term from SN?
> >>
> >> Sure.  It imports other terms.  Alex, do you want to bring it in?
> >>
> >> Also, I think that the definition could be improved.  It currently reads:
> >>
> >>    Event record: A set of information detailing an event.
> >
> > Yes.  But the word 'event' here is itself defined as:
> >
> >   Event: An occurrence of something that may be of interest.  Examples
> >   include a configuration change, a fault, a change in status, crossing
> >   a threshold, or an external input to the system.
> >
> >Reviewers have liked separation of the event itself from the record about it.
> 
> 
> I'm okay with separation.  On one hand, it seems like common English, but it
> might be good to have it well-defined in this draft.  Still it seems that the
> definition could be improved, maybe by contrasting it to an event?
> One is the what happened, the other a record about what happened...

What I am hearing from you is:

Event record: A set of information detailing an event.  This information is different from the event itself, and provides a recorded history of what happened.

If yes, I am fine with this.

Eric

> Kent // contributor
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