Re: [Rfced-future] New Version Notification for draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-08.txt

Hi Peter,

Thanks. Looking through the diffs, I noticed a few things:

* "The RSWG is empowered to hold in-person or online-only meetings" -- this wording could be interpreted to prevent hybrid meetings, or online participation in in-person meetings.

* "The RSAB consists primarily of certain voting members.  As specified herein, the RSAB also includes certain non-voting members." -- this is quite wordy...

* "The RFC Series Consulting Editor, in effect representing the Editorial Stream" -- my understanding was that the RSCE's inclusion on the RSAB was not only for this purpose, so this could mislead. Also, it makes this text somewhat contradictory: "Note: this method of handling vacancies does not apply to a vacancy of the RSCE role, To ensure the smooth operation of the RFC Series, the RSAB shall only of the stream representatives enumerated above."

* "Email messages sent to the RSAB email discussion list or exchanged among all members of the RSAB shall be publicly archived..." -- I think the "or exchanged among all members of the RSAB" clause is impractical and ineffective, and it should be removed. I don't feel strongly about it to formally object, though.

Cheers,

> On 8 Jan 2022, at 10:53 am, Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> wrote:
> 
> As promised...
> 
> 
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-08.txt
> Date: Fri, 07 Jan 2022 15:52:19 -0800
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> To: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im>
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-08.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Peter Saint-Andre and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Name:		draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model
> Revision:	08
> Title:		RFC Editor Model (Version 3)
> Document date:	2022-01-07
> Group:		iab
> Pages:		31
> URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-08.txt
> Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model/
> Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model
> Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-08
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document specifies version 3 of the RFC Editor Model.  The model
>   defines two high-level tasks related to the RFC Series.  First,
>   policy definition is the joint responsibility of the RFC Series
>   Working Group (RSWG), which produces policy proposals, and the RFC
>   Series Approval Board (RSAB), which approves such proposals.  Second,
>   policy implementation is primarily the responsibility of the RFC
>   Production Center (RPC) as contractually overseen by the IETF
>   Administration Limited Liability Company (IETF LLC).
> 
>   This document obsoletes RFC 8728.  This document updates RFC 7841,
>   RFC 8729, and RFC 8730.
> 
> 
> 
> The IETF Secretariat
> 
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