Re: [Rfced-future] New Version Notification for draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-08.txt

["Martin J. Dürst" <[e-mail]>]

s/that that/that/

otherwise fine.

Regards,   Martin.

On 2022-01-11 10:58, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
> On 1/9/22 5:04 AM, Stephen Farrell wrote:
>>
>>
>> On 09/01/2022 08:23, Mark Nottingham wrote:
>>> * "Email messages sent to the RSAB email discussion list or exchanged
>>> among all members of the RSAB shall be publicly archived..." -- I
>>> think the "or exchanged among all members of the RSAB" clause is
>>> impractical and ineffective, and it should be removed.
>>
>> +1 - seems better to only publicly archive the "main" RSAB
>> list.
> 
> Proposed text...
> 
> OLD
> 
>     The RSAB shall keep a public record of its proceedings, including
>     minutes of all meetings and a record of all decisions.  Email
>     messages sent to the RSAB email discussion list or exchanged among
>     all members of the RSAB shall be publicly archived, with the
>     exception of topics that require confidentiality (e.g., personnel
>     matters).  Similarly, meeting minutes may exclude detailed
>     information about topics discussed under executive session, but
>     should note that such topics were discussed.
> 
> NEW
> 
>     The RSAB shall keep a public record of its proceedings, including
>     minutes of all meetings and a record of all decisions. The primary
>     email discussion list used by the RSAB shall be publicly archived,
>     although topics that that require confidentiality (e.g., personnel
>     matters) may be elided from such archives or discussed in private.
>     Similarly, meeting minutes may exclude detailed information about
>     topics discussed under executive session, but should note that such
>     topics were discussed.
> 
> /psa
> 

-- 
Prof. Dr.sc. Martin J. Dürst
Department of Intelligent Information Technology
College of Science and Engineering
Aoyama Gakuin University
Fuchinobe 5-1-10, Chuo-ku, Sagamihara
252-5258 Japan