Re: [Softwires] I-D Action: draft-ietf-softwire-stateless-4v6-motivation-02.txt

Hi Med,

Thanks for posting this new version but I guess it doesn't reflect all
the discussion we had. I suggest to make following modifications.

"States still should be maintained in other equipments, e.g.  customer
premises equipment or host, in order to restrict port numbers within a
dedicated range."

Please be undestood all the efforts are for precise expression for the readers.

Thanks,

Best Regards,
Dapeng Liu

2012/6/12, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>:
> Dear WG members,
>
> The new version includes the comments received during the WG LC (from
> Dapeng).
>
> A diff is available here:
>
> http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-softwire-stateless-4v6-motivation-02
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
>
>>-----Message d'origine-----
>>De : softwires-bounces@ietf.org
>>[mailto:softwires-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de
>>internet-drafts@ietf.org
>>Envoyé : mardi 12 juin 2012 07:43
>>À : i-d-announce@ietf.org
>>Cc : softwires@ietf.org
>>Objet : [Softwires] I-D Action:
>>draft-ietf-softwire-stateless-4v6-motivation-02.txt
>>
>>
>>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
>>Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Softwires Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>	Title           : Motivations for Carrier-side
>>Stateless IPv4 over IPv6 Migration Solutions
>>	Author(s)       : Mohamed Boucadair
>>                          Satoru Matsushima
>>                          Yiu Lee
>>                          Olaf Bonness
>>                          Isabel Borges
>>                          Gang Chen
>>	Filename        :
>>draft-ietf-softwire-stateless-4v6-motivation-02.txt
>>	Pages           : 16
>>	Date            : 2012-06-11
>>
>>Abstract:
>>   IPv4 service continuity is one of the most pressing problems that
>>   must be resolved by Service Providers during the IPv6 transition
>>   period - especially after the exhaustion of the public IPv4 address
>>   space.  Current standardization effort that addresses IPv4 service
>>   continuity focuses on stateful mechanisms.  This document elaborates
>>   on the motivations for the need to undertake a companion effort to
>>   specify stateless IPv4 over IPv6 approaches.
>>
>>
>>
>>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-stateless-
>>4v6-motivation
>>
>>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>http://tools.ietf.org/html/submission.filename }}-02
>>
>>A diff from previous version is available at:
>>http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-softwire-stateles
>>s-4v6-motivation-02
>>
>>
>>Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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Best Regards,
Dapeng Liu