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Fernando Gont <fernando@gont.com.ar> Tue, 02 March 2010 22:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tcpm] WGLC: draft-ietf-tcpm-urgent-data-02.txt
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Hi, David,

Thanks so much for pushing this forward!

Comments inline...

> WG chair hat off: ----------------- I just realized that: 1) The
> document should have at the top: Updates: RFCs 793, 1011, 1122 

Will ask on the xml2rfc list what's the xml code to do that. If anybody
knows, please do let me know.


> 2) The
> "1. Introduction" section should say that it updates all 3 RFCs, not
> just RFC 1122. 

Will do.


> 3) The Normative References should include RFC 1011. 

Will do.


> 4) The "4. Updating RFC 1122" section should also mention all 3 RFCs,
> not just RFC 1122

Will do.



> The other RFCs that talk about the urgent pointer, 924, 944, 961 and
> 991, are all obsoleted by RFC 1011, hence only RFC 1011 needs to be
> mentioned.

Ok. Will go through the draft and try to replace references to the
aforementioned RFCs with references to RFC 1101.

If you agree, I can post a rev in the next few days, so that we ship the
I-D with all these tihngs fixes (plus the nit John Heffner has just
pointed out).

Thanks!

Kind regards,
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Fernando Gont
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