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Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Tue, 05 July 2022 15:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-06
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On 7/5/22 8:44 AM, Salz, Rich wrote:
>>     I found the part "and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net." to be
>      confusing, as I initially read it as "the combination of an application
>      service type ... and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.", which is
>      not the case according to the following sentence.
> 
>      So I suggest either removing this part, or changing it to something like
>      " and, separately, a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.".
> 
> Thanks for the feedback!  Change made.
> 
> I am about to merge that change, the other diffs we have discussed on the "Yaron" thread, and this change to meet the consensus called by the chairs:
> -   Identifiers such as IP address are not discussed. In addition, the focus of
> +  Identifiers such as IP address are not discussed.
> +  Protocols other than HTTP may want to consider
> +  {{HTTP-SEMANTICS, Section 4.3.5}} as a validation model.
> +  In addition, the focus of
> 
> I'm about to post a new version of the draft.

Thanks, Rich. At some point we should also fix the text about reg-name 
that Martin flagged (I just now proposed text in the GitHub issue):

https://github.com/richsalz/draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis/issues/55

Peter

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