Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-06

Hi,

My apologies for late response. I read the document and I generally 
found it in a good state and thus support its publication. I have one 
minor comment:

2nd paragraph of 6.4 reads:

    These identifiers provide an application service type portion to be
    checked, but that portion is combined only with the DNS domain name
    portion of the SRV-ID or URI-ID itself.  For example, if a client's
    list of reference identifiers includes an SRV-ID of _xmpp-
    client.im.example.org and a DNS-ID of apps.example.net, the client
    MUST check both the combination of an application service type of
    xmpp-client and a DNS domain name of im.example.org and a DNS domain
    name of apps.example.net.

I found the part "and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net." to be 
confusing, as I initially read it as "the combination of an application 
service type ... and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.", which is 
not the case according to the following sentence.

So I suggest either removing this part, or changing it to something like 
" and, separately, a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.".

    However, the client MUST NOT check the
    combination of an application service type of xmpp-client and a DNS
    domain name of apps.example.net because it does not have an SRV-ID of
    _xmpp-client.apps.example.net in its list of reference identifiers.

>> Hi,
>>
>> this message starts a Working Group Last Call for
>> draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-06:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis/
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>> Regards,
>> Leif & Valery.
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