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Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-06

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Tue, 05 July 2022 14:44 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com>, Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com>, "uta@ietf.org" <uta@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-06
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>    I found the part "and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net." to be 
    confusing, as I initially read it as "the combination of an application 
    service type ... and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.", which is 
    not the case according to the following sentence.

    So I suggest either removing this part, or changing it to something like 
    " and, separately, a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.".

Thanks for the feedback!  Change made.

I am about to merge that change, the other diffs we have discussed on the "Yaron" thread, and this change to meet the consensus called by the chairs:
-   Identifiers such as IP address are not discussed. In addition, the focus of
+  Identifiers such as IP address are not discussed.
+  Protocols other than HTTP may want to consider
+  {{HTTP-SEMANTICS, Section 4.3.5}} as a validation model.
+  In addition, the focus of

I'm about to post a new version of the draft.

Thanks everyone for the feedback.

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