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Re: [Apn] Further revised draft Charter

"Huanghongyi(Datacom-Standard&Patent-Dept)" <hongyi.huang@huawei.com> Wed, 18 January 2023 10:19 UTC

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From: "Huanghongyi(Datacom-Standard&Patent-Dept)" <hongyi.huang@huawei.com>
To: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Hi Donald,

I’ve read the new charter and hope the next two comments can help you.
1. At the beginning of the charter, prioritization and QoS/SLA are distinct as "various services". What is the difference between these two categories, and whether there is a clearer boundary.
2. Is it more appropriate to change the phrase "The Appropriate Performance Networking (APNET) WG goal is" to "The goal of xxx is"?

Best,
Hongyi

From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Apn] Further revised draft Charter

I've gotten some comments and I've re-read some of the AD DISCUSSES and comments. Based on that I've updated the draft Charter as attached.  Comments are welcome.

Thanks,
Donald
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