Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Hi all,

A reminder that an updated draft is needed to address Marie-Jose's 
review comments before this can progress.

Colin

On 22 May 2023, at 10:58, Marie-Jose Montpetit wrote:

> I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these 
> very
> dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed 
> follow-on
> documents to this more general overview.
> So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect 
> substantial
> new information about them.
>
> I’m fine. Maybe just adding a few words then and we look at future
> documents :)
>
>
> mjm
>
>
> Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.
> marie@mjmontpetit.com
>
>
>
> From: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>
> Reply: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>
> Date: May 22, 2023 at 3:16:30 AM
> To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> 
> <marie@mjmontpetit.com>
> Cc: 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr> <jhong@etri.re.kr>, 
> yonggeun.hong@gmail.com
> <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>, Xavier De Foy
> <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com>,
> ietf@kovatsch.net <ietf@kovatsch.net> <ietf@kovatsch.net>, Eve 
> Schooler
> <eve.schooler@gmail.com> <eve.schooler@gmail.com>, Dirk Kutscher
> <ietf@dkutscher.net> <ietf@dkutscher.net>, Internet Research Steering 
> Group
> <irsg@irtf.org> <irsg@irtf.org>, t2trg@irtf.org <t2trg@irtf.org>
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> Subject:  Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge
>
> Hi Marie-José,
>
> On 2023-05-19, at 18:41, Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com>
> wrote:
>>
>> Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is 
>> very
> current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached.
>
> Thank you for the detailed review, which I still have to digest (just
> returned from vacation).
>
>> My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid 
>> the
> document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of 
> the
> use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now 
> a
> main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it 
> should
> be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge.
>
> <hats off>
>
> I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these 
> very
> dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed 
> follow-on
> documents to this more general overview.
> So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect 
> substantial
> new information about them.
>
> Grüße, Carsten

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