Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge
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I plan to be done by tomorrow. mjm Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D. marie@mjmontpetit.com From: Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org> <csp@csperkins.org> Reply: Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org> <csp@csperkins.org> Date: July 19, 2023 at 10:47:10 AM To: Xavier De Foy <xavier.defoy=40interdigital.com@dmarc.ietf.org> <xavier.defoy=40interdigital.com@dmarc.ietf.org> Cc: Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> <marie@mjmontpetit.com>, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>, yonggeun.hong@gmail.com <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>, t2trg@irtf.org <t2trg@irtf.org> <t2trg@irtf.org>, Internet Research Steering Group <irsg@irtf.org> <irsg@irtf.org>, 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr> <jhong@etri.re.kr>, ietf@kovatsch.net <ietf@kovatsch.net> <ietf@kovatsch.net> Subject: Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge Thanks, Xavier. Look forward to Marie-Jose's comments on the changes and the resulting submission. Cheers, Colin On 18 Jul 2023, at 16:36, Xavier De Foy wrote: Hi Marie-Jose, thank you again for your review. Sorry for the delayed response. We will upload a new draft revision when the I-D submission tool reopens. In the meantime, here is a pdf including our responses to the comments, and a diff showing the related updates to the text. The diff also addresses you point about Mobile Edge X (in section 4.1). Please let us know if you have any further comments. Best Regards, Xavier, on behalf of the co-authors *From:* Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 23, 2023 4:07 PM *To:* Xavier De Foy <Xavier.DeFoy@InterDigital.com>; Carsten Bormann < cabo@tzi.org> *Cc:* yonggeun.hong@gmail.com; ietf@kovatsch.net; Internet Research Steering Group <irsg@irtf.org>; Kutscher, Dirk <ietf@dkutscher.net>; Eve Schooler <eve.schooler@gmail.com>; t2trg@irtf.org; 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr> *Subject:* RE: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge It was a pleasure to do it as the topic is of great interest to me :) Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D. marie@mjmontpetit.com From: Xavier De Foy <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> Reply: Xavier De Foy <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> Date: May 23, 2023 at 3:51:54 PM To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> <marie@mjmontpetit.com>, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org> Cc: yonggeun.hong@gmail.com <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>, ietf@kovatsch.net <ietf@kovatsch.net> <ietf@kovatsch.net>, Internet Research Steering Group <irsg@irtf.org> <irsg@irtf.org>, Kutscher, Dirk <ietf@dkutscher.net> <ietf@dkutscher.net>, Eve Schooler <eve.schooler@gmail.com> <eve.schooler@gmail.com>, t2trg@irtf.org <t2trg@irtf.org> <t2trg@irtf.org>, 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr> <jhong@etri.re.kr> Subject: RE: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge Hi Marie-José, Thank you for sharing this thorough review, we (co-authors) will prepare an update to address your comments and will get back to you. And we will also take your comment on Mobile Edge X into account. Best Regards, Xavier. *From:* Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 23, 2023 3:44 PM *To:* Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> *Cc:* yonggeun.hong@gmail.com; ietf@kovatsch.net; Internet Research Steering Group <irsg@irtf.org>; Kutscher, Dirk <ietf@dkutscher.net>; Eve Schooler <eve.schooler@gmail.com>; t2trg@irtf.org; 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr>; Xavier De Foy <Xavier.DeFoy@InterDigital.com> *Subject:* Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge I just realized that Mobile EdgeX that is mentioned in the draft was acquired by Google. So should be updated. mjm Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D. marie@mjmontpetit.com From: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org> Reply: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org> Date: May 22, 2023 at 3:16:30 AM To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> <marie@mjmontpetit.com> Cc: 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr> <jhong@etri.re.kr>, yonggeun.hong@gmail.com <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>, Xavier De Foy <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com>, ietf@kovatsch.net <ietf@kovatsch.net> <ietf@kovatsch.net>, Eve Schooler <eve.schooler@gmail.com> <eve.schooler@gmail.com>, Dirk Kutscher <ietf@dkutscher.net> <ietf@dkutscher.net>, Internet Research Steering Group <irsg@irtf.org> <irsg@irtf.org>, t2trg@irtf.org <t2trg@irtf.org> <t2trg@irtf.org> Subject: Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge Hi Marie-José, On 2023-05-19, at 18:41, Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> wrote: > > Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is very current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached. Thank you for the detailed review, which I still have to digest (just returned from vacation). > My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid the document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of the use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now a main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it should be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge. <hats off> I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these very dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed follow-on documents to this more general overview. So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect substantial new information about them. 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- [T2TRG] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge Marie-Jose Montpetit
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Marie-Jose Montpetit
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Marie-Jose Montpetit
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Xavier De Foy
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Marie-Jose Montpetit
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Colin Perkins
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Jungha Hong
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Colin Perkins
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Xavier De Foy
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Colin Perkins
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Marie-Jose Montpetit
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Colin Perkins
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Marie-Jose Montpetit
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Xavier De Foy
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Colin Perkins
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Xavier De Foy
- Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot… Colin Perkins