Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

[Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]>]

Woke up early to do this :)

I am happy with the changes. A nit: Eve is not at Intel anymore so maybe
you want to put another affiliation?

mjm

Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.
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From: Xavier De Foy <[e-mail]>
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Reply: Xavier De Foy <[e-mail]>
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Date: July 18, 2023 at 12:43:08 PM
To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, Carsten
Bormann <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Cc: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, Internet Research Steering Group <[e-mail]>
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Subject:  RE: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Hi Marie-Jose, thank you again for your review. Sorry for the delayed
response.



We will upload a new draft revision when the I-D submission tool reopens.



In the meantime, here is a pdf including our responses to the comments, and
a diff showing the related updates to the text. The diff also addresses you
point about Mobile Edge X (in section 4.1).



Please let us know if you have any further comments.



Best Regards,

Xavier, on behalf of the co-authors



*From:* Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]>
*Sent:* Tuesday, May 23, 2023 4:07 PM
*To:* Xavier De Foy <[e-mail]>; Carsten Bormann <
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It was a pleasure to do it as the topic is of great interest to me :)
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It was a pleasure to do it as the topic is of great interest to me :)



Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.

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From: Xavier De Foy <[e-mail]>
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Reply: Xavier De Foy <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>
Date: May 23, 2023 at 3:51:54 PM
To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>,
Carsten Bormann <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Cc: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, Internet Research Steering Group <[e-mail]>
<[e-mail]>, Kutscher, Dirk <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>,
Eve Schooler <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>,
[e-mail] <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>, 정하 홍 <[e-mail]>
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Subject:  RE: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge



Hi Marie-José,



  Thank you for sharing this thorough review, we (co-authors) will prepare
an update to address your comments and will get back to you. And we will
also take your comment on Mobile Edge X into account.



  Best Regards,



Xavier.



*From:* Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]>
*Sent:* Tuesday, May 23, 2023 3:44 PM
*To:* Carsten Bormann <[e-mail]>
*Cc:* [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Internet Research
Steering Group <[e-mail]>; Kutscher, Dirk <[e-mail]>; Eve
Schooler <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; 정하 홍 <[e-mail]>;
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*Subject:* Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge





I just realized that Mobile EdgeX that is mentioned in the draft was
acquired by Google. So should be updated.



mjm



Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.

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From: Carsten Bormann <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Reply: Carsten Bormann <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
Date: May 22, 2023 at 3:16:30 AM
To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]> <[e-mail]>
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Subject:  Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge



Hi Marie-José,

On 2023-05-19, at 18:41, Marie-Jose Montpetit <[e-mail]>
wrote:
>
> Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is very
current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached.

Thank you for the detailed review, which I still have to digest (just
returned from vacation).

> My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid the
document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of the
use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now a
main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it should
be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge.

<hats off>

I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these very
dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed follow-on
documents to this more general overview.
So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect substantial
new information about them.

Grüße, Carsten

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