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[T2TRG] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> Fri, 19 May 2023 16:41 UTC

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Subject: [T2TRG] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge
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Dear authors.

Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is very
current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached.

 My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid the
document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of the
use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now a
main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it should
be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge.

I am happy to discuss further.

mjm

Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.
marie@mjmontpetit.com

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