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Re: [dane] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-dane-openpgpkey - *please* review.

Lyndon Nerenberg <lyndon@orthanc.ca> Mon, 09 March 2015 01:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dane] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-dane-openpgpkey - *please* review.
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On Mar 8, 2015, at 6:12 PM, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org> wrote:

>   sender's email client, MUA or MTA.
> An Oxford comma is very much needed in that sentence.

If we're copy editing, "email client" and "MUA" are redundant.

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