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Re: [dane] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-dane-openpgpkey - *please* review.

"Rose, Scott W." <scott.rose@nist.gov> Wed, 25 February 2015 17:16 UTC

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On Feb 23, 2015, at 12:31 PM, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> wrote:

> [ Meta top post ]
> 
> I'd like to also draw attention to the "companion" document
> draft-ietf-dane-openpgpkey-usage (
> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dane-openpgpkey-usage/ ),
> which describes usage of openpgpkey records, and following CNAMES.
> 

Is this also in WGLC?  Either way, some comments:

- In section 1 (Intro), there is an incorrect XML tag (xref)

- In Section 3.3 Final paragraph about wildcards:  ...at other locations (e.g. hugh@*.com) or regular expressions in keu uids are not allowed, adn any OPENPGPKEY RR containing these should be ignored."

Should that be a SHOULD above?  It discusses implementation behavior in addition to what is already described in Sections 4.3 & 4.4.  

- In Section 3.4 spelling s/Resoruce/Resource and s/accomodate/accommodate

- In Section 4. s/twart/thwart

At least I assume that last one - my spell checker gets confused about UK vs. US english.  

Scott

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