Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt

["Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <[e-mail]>]

Hi YongJoon,
Thanks for your review on the IPWAVE PS draft.

I modified the text about the blockchain for vehicular networks according
to your comments:
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Each message from a vehicle can be treated as a transaction and the
neighboring vehicles
can play the role of peers in a consensus method of a blockchain
[Bitcoin][Vehicular-BlockChain].
For a blockchain's efficient consensus in vehicular networks having fast
moving vehicles,
a new consensus algorithm needs to be developed or an existing consensus
algorithm needs
to be enhanced.
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I attach the revised draft having this update.

Best Regards,
Paul


On Tue, Jul 7, 2020 at 12:03 PM YongJoon Joe <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hello Paul and IPWAVE WG,
>
>
> I've read the new version of the draft, and it reflects my comments and
> revised well.
>
>
> However, I have a concern about the new paragraph in Section 6.
>
> The paragraph describes utilizing blockchain technology within IPWAVE.
> However, the explicitly mentioned consensus algorithm, such as PoW and
> PoS, may not be compatible with the IPWAVE environment. (PoW takes too much
> time for highspeed vehicles' cooperative negotiation. And PoS may not be
> consistent because it requires global reputation(stake))
> Therefore, I think the draft may avoid mentioning the algorithm's name
> explicitly and mentions that we have to develop a new algorithm or adopt
> another existing algorithm that is adequate for IPWAVE.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> YongJoon Joe
>
>
>  ---- On Mon, 29 Jun 2020 18:50:14 +0900 Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> [e-mail]> wrote ----
>  > Hi IPWAVE WG,I have submitted the revision of IPWAVE PS Draft as
> follows:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>  > The following 8 people reviewed this draft: Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco),
> Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company),  Jung-Soo Park (ETRI),  Zeungil (Ben)
> Kim (Hyundai Motors),  Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University),  Zhiwei Yan
> (CNNIC),  Yong-Joon Joe (LSware), and  Peter E. Yee (Akayla).
>  >
>  > I sincerely appreciate those reviewers' efforts to improve our IPWAVE
> PS WG draft.
>  > I attach the revision letter to show how I have addressed their
> comments.
>  > The reviewers above (i.e., Nancy, Fred, Jung-Soo, Zeungil, Kyoungjae,
> Zhiwei, Yong-Joon, and Peter),Could you doublecheck whether or not my
> revision has addressed your comments by July 5th, 2020 in EST?
>  > If you have further comments, please let me know.
>  > If this review during this period does not raise other further
> comments, I would like to ask for a WGLC on this draft.
>  > Thanks.
>  > Best Regards,Paul  --
>  > ===========================
>  > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
>  > Associate Professor
>  > Department of Computer Science and Engineering
>  > Sungkyunkwan University
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>  > On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>  >
>  > _______________________________________________
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>  >
>  > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  > This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular
> Environments WG of the IETF.
>  >
>  >         Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular
> Environments (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
>  >         Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
>  >         Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
>  >         Pages           : 39
>  >         Date            : 2020-06-29
>  >
>  > Abstract:
>  >    This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
>  >    IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
>  >    Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
>  >    vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
>  >    vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
>  >    explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, for
>  >    IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
>  >    IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
>  >    and Security & Privacy), and then lists up requirements for the
>  >    extensions of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular
>  >    networking.
>  >
>  >
>  > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>  >
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/
>  >
>  > There are also htmlized versions available at:
>  > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>  >
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>  >
>  > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>  >
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>  >
>  >
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Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
Associate Professor
Department of Computer Science and Engineering
Sungkyunkwan University
Office: [phone]
Email: [e-mail], [e-mail]
Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
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