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Re: New document shepherd writeup

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Wed, 04 May 2022 11:46 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, Bernard Aboba <bernard.aboba@gmail.com>
CC: IETF WG Chairs <wgchairs@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: New document shepherd writeup
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Date: Wed, 04 May 2022 11:46:06 +0000
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>   it used to be just the authors, but then got broadened out to ask about the entire WG. The wording "interested community" was chosen to also capture the non-WG-document case. Could this be made clearer?

Probably with just "(e.g., the WG membership)" ?

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