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Re: New document shepherd writeup

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Subject: Re: New document shepherd writeup
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>    The update

>       5. Does this document need review from other IETF working groups or
       external organizations? Have those reviews occurred?

>    ...is a variation of the previous

>       (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or
       from broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity,
       AAA, DNS, DHCP, XML, or internationalization? If so, describe the
       review that took place.

>    Instead of listing specific aspects we decided to generalize.

It doesn't just generalize, it also expands the scope of the question.  The previous question gave examples (very useful to shepherd authors!) that could all be addressed within the IETF.  The new question explicitly calls out "external organizations"  Where do we draw the line?  Should all DNS documents get reviewed by some ICANN group, for example?

Also, I am repeating a previous question because I haven't seen an answer yet: was the wording on the IPR disclosures proposed, or at least discussed and reviewed, with IETF counsel?

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