Re: Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-06

Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com> Thu, 12 January 2017 21:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-06
From: Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com>
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Brian,

> On Jan 11, 2017, at 7:32 AM, Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net> wrote:
> 
> Hi Bob,
> 
> On 1/10/17 7:48 PM, Bob Hinden wrote:
>> Brian,
>> 
>> Thanks for the review!
>> 
>>> On Jan 10, 2017, at 8:32 AM, Brian Haberman
>>> <brian@innovationslab.net> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Reviewer: Brian Haberman Review result: Ready with Nits
>>> 
>>> I just have a few comments/questions on this draft. Overall, it is
>>> in pretty good shape...
>>> 
>>> 1. Section 2.2.3 looks like a complete re-production of RFC 5952,
>>> but I don't see a reference to 5952. Is the intent to deprecate
>>> 5952 since its content is now contained within 4291bis?
>> 
>> I didn’t include a direct reference in the Section as incorporates
>> the changes, but it is included in Appendix B describing the
>> changes.
>> 
>> No current intent to deprecate RFC5952 as it updates RFC4291.  I
>> don’t see very much value in deprecating (Historic?) the updating
>> RFCs.
> 
> I will agree with Randy that there is useful info in 5952 that people
> need to see. Adding a reference to 5952 here would point people in the
> right direction.

Makes sense, I will add a reference to RFC5952 in the next version of the draft.

Thanks,
Bob

> 
> Regards,
> Brian
>