Re: Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-06

Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com> Thu, 12 January 2017 20:52 UTC

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Subject: Re: Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-06
From: Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com>
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Keolebogile,

You are correct.  I will fix in the next version.

Thanks,
Bob


> On Jan 11, 2017, at 6:24 AM, Punana Lebo <keopunana@yahoo.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello
>  
> I am new to this and I hope my comment is appropriate
>  
> The examples in recommendation 7 and 8 in section 2.2.3 have been swapped. In other words, an example given for recommendation 7 (0:0:0:0:0:ffff:192.0.2.1 should be shown as ::ffff:192.0.2.1) must be  for recommendation 8 (2001:0db8:0000:cd30:0000:0000:0000:0000/60 should be shown as 2001:0db8:0:cd30::/60) and vise versa.
>  
> Regards
>  
> Keolebogile
>  
>  
> 
> 
> On Tuesday, January 10, 2017 6:32 PM, Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net> wrote:
> 
> 
> Reviewer: Brian Haberman
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I just have a few comments/questions on this draft. Overall, it is in
> pretty good shape...
> 
> 1. Section 2.2.3 looks like a complete re-production of RFC 5952, but
> I don't see a reference to 5952. Is the intent to deprecate 5952 since
> its content is now contained within 4291bis?
> 
> 2. Section 2.6.1 captures some information about reserved IPv6
> multicast addresses, but not all of them. I think it would be
> beneficial to point to the IPv6 Multicast Address Allocation registry
> maintained by IANA, much like the way Section 2.3 points to the IANA
> registries.
> 
> 3. Also in Section 2.6.1, the names of reserved addresses, like "All
> Nodes Addresses", were made all lowercase. Was that intentional? Given
> that IANA refers to them with capitalization, it would seem that we
> need to be consistent. So, I would either retain the capitalization in
> this document or ensure that Section 3 directs IANA to update the
> names in the registries.
> 
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