Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [IAB] I18ndir last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11

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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [IAB] I18ndir last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
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On 3/2/22 8:06 PM, John C Klensin wrote:
> 
> 
> --On Thursday, March 3, 2022 08:57 +1300 Brian E Carpenter
> <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> "RFC Editor Function" is used in other drafts too. I think
>> that dropping this phrase would have many repercussions and we
>> should just keep it.
> 
> In case it was not clear, I agree.  I just think that a
> definition --probably a deliberately vague one-- in the model
> document might be helpful.

Perhaps something like this:

###

The overall framework for the RFC Series and the RFC Editor
Function is described in {{RFC8729}} and is updated by this
document. Under version 3 of the RFC Editor Model, various
responsibilities of the RFC Editor Function are now performed
alone or in combination by the RSWG, RSAB, RPC, RFC Series
Consulting Editor (RSCE), and IETF LLC, which collectively
comprise the essence of the RFC Editor Function.

###