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Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [IAB] I18ndir last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Fri, 04 March 2022 00:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [IAB] I18ndir last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
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On 3/3/22 4:14 PM, Martin J. Dürst wrote:
> On 2022-03-04 00:52, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
> 
>> Perhaps something like this:
>>
>> ###
>>
>> The overall framework for the RFC Series and the RFC Editor
>> Function is described in {{RFC8729}} and is updated by this
>> document. Under version 3 of the RFC Editor Model, various
>> responsibilities of the RFC Editor Function are now performed
>> alone or in combination by the RSWG, RSAB, RPC, RFC Series
>> Consulting Editor (RSCE), and IETF LLC, which collectively
>> comprise the essence of the RFC Editor Function.
>>
>> ###
>>
> 
> Very good, as usual. However, I'd cut out "the essence". There may be 
> some other little splinters somewhere, but I couldn't name them.

Yes, I said "the essence" to forestall the objection that there are 
little splinters somewhere. But I'm happy to remove those words.

Peter

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