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Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [IAB] I18ndir last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11

"Martin J. Dürst" <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp> Thu, 03 March 2022 23:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: [IAB] I18ndir last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
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On 2022-03-04 00:52, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:

> Perhaps something like this:
> 
> ###
> 
> The overall framework for the RFC Series and the RFC Editor
> Function is described in {{RFC8729}} and is updated by this
> document. Under version 3 of the RFC Editor Model, various
> responsibilities of the RFC Editor Function are now performed
> alone or in combination by the RSWG, RSAB, RPC, RFC Series
> Consulting Editor (RSCE), and IETF LLC, which collectively
> comprise the essence of the RFC Editor Function.
> 
> ###
> 

Very good, as usual. However, I'd cut out "the essence". There may be 
some other little splinters somewhere, but I couldn't name them.

Regards,   Martin.

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