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Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID

Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> Fri, 14 May 2021 15:18 UTC

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From: Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net>
To: Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>, "Black, David" <David.Black@dell.com>, "tsvwg@ietf.org" <tsvwg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID
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Gorry, David, List,

I believe I've now started threads on the list about all the points you 
raised, and most are resolved. I see some more responses, which I'll 
deal with later. When/if everything seems to be resolved, I'll finalize 
the edits and submit another draft.


Bob

On 13/05/2021 18:50, Bob Briscoe wrote:
> Gorry, (and David and Wes I believe)
>
> Thank you for the extremely diligent review.
> Those points that can just be accepted will be, without comment.
> Otherwise, you will now start to see responses to them on the list. 
> I'll try to group them to minimize confusion, and I'll add the item 
> no's. in the subject line.
>
>
> Bob
>
>
> On 06/05/2021 07:52, Gorry Fairhurst wrote:
>>
>> Here are some review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID that I 
>> hope will help in preparation of a new revision of the draft. More 
>> details have been sent to the authors.
>>
>>
>> Best wishes,
>>
>>
>> Gorry
>>
>>
>
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