Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID (27. Appx B & C)

[Martin Duke <[e-mail]>]

SGTM

On Fri, May 14, 2021 at 8:46 AM Gorry Fairhurst <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> On 14/05/2021 16:09, Bob Briscoe wrote:
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> Chairs, Martin,
> See [BB]
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> ACK.
>
> That seems like a good plan, and was what we discussed.
>
> Gorry
>
> On 06/05/2021 07:52, Gorry Fairhurst wrote:
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> *27. Appendix B and C *
> ⁃            Appendix B is lengthy, at best loosely connected with the
> rest of the draft, definitely out of date, and not aligned with current WG
> views of this area. This appendix can be removed prior to publication.
> Appendix C is unecessary to the final publication.
>  =================================================================
>
>
> [BB] Offlist discussion with the chairs and Martin has come up with the
> solution of deleting the sub-sections of these appendices that are not
> referenced from the rest of the draft, but keeping those that are.
>
> B.1 is referenced from the body of the draft a couple of times, because
> it's the pros and cons of the chosen scheme.
> C.1 is referenced from the security considerations.
>
> So I'm planning on promoting B.1 to B, and C.1 to C.
> But I'll take out the remainder of B and C, and change the introductory
> context of each.
>
> For reference, here's the end of the ToC as it stands before the proposed
> edits:
>
>   Appendix B <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B>.  Alternative Identifiers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  46 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-46>
>      B.1 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.1>.  ECT(1) and CE codepoints  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  47 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-47>
>      B.2 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.2>.  ECN-DualQ-SCE1  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  51 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-51>
>      B.3 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.3>.  ECN-DualQ-SCE0  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  54 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-54>
>      B.4 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.4>.  ECN Plus a Diffserv Codepoint (DSCP)  . . . . . . . . . .  56 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-56>
>      B.5 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.5>.  ECN capability alone  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  58 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-58>
>      B.6 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.6>.  Protocol ID . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  58 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-58>
>      B.7 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.7>.  Source or destination addressing  . . . . . . . . . . . .  59 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-59>
>      B.8 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.8>.  Summary: Merits of Alternative Identifiers  . . . . . . .  59 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-59>
>    Appendix C <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-C>.  Potential Competing Uses for the ECT(1) Codepoint  .  60
>      C.1 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-C.1>.  Integrity of Congestion Feedback  . . . . . . . . . . . .  60 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-60>
>      C.2 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-C.2>.  Notification of Less Severe Congestion than CE  . . . . .  61 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-61>
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> Bob
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