Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID
Sebastian Moeller <moeller0@gmx.de> Fri, 07 May 2021 06:34 UTC
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To: tsvwg@ietf.org, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>, "Black, David" <David.Black@dell.com>, Tom Henderson <tomh@tomh.org>
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID
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Gorry, On 6 May 2021 22:39:12 CEST, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> wrote: >Tom/David, > >Aha - I see now. Another possibility could be something like: > >"Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) Protocol for Ultra-Low Queuing >Delay (L4S)" ?? [SM] I thought "ultra-low" is going to be replaced with "consistently low"? Also if the ecn-id draft is considered a specification for protocols I very much would expect to see at least one fully functioning mostly-finished actual protocol being developed from that spec BEFORE standardisation as proof thar the spec itself is sufficiently complete and functional, no? And TCP Prague with all its unfinished/partly abandoned? attempts at implementing the 'specification's' requirements is not that convincing that the spec is complete and reasonably implementable. To be explicit, neither RTT-debiasing, nor rfc3168 detection are robustly and reliably tackled which is somewhat sobering given that the requirements exist for IIRC more than 5 years now... Regards P. > >Gorry > > >On 06/05/2021 21:30, Black, David wrote: >> Tom, >> >> I'm the source of pushback here. In my view, L4S is an interesting >mix, as the L4S ID draft does not define a complete protocol - rather, >it specifies the ECN marking mechanism and places requirements on the >endpoint congestion control response without specifying that response >in detail (e.g., to implement TCP Prague congestion control based on >L4S, one also needs to also go look at a TCP Prague spec). >> >> I'd be happy with "mechanism" or "functionality" but I don't see a >fully implementable "protocol" here. What do you think? >> >> Thanks, --David >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: tsvwg <tsvwg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Tom Henderson >> Sent: Thursday, May 6, 2021 1:19 PM >> To: Gorry Fairhurst >> Cc: tsvwg@ietf.org >> Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID >> >> >> [EXTERNAL EMAIL] >> >> On 5/5/21 11:52 PM, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: >>> ================================================================= >>> >>> *5. Please be careful with the words here.* >>> >>> ** >>> >>> This text: >>> >>> “This specificationdefines _the protocol to be used for_ a new >network >>> >>> service called low latency, low loss and scalable throughput (L4S).” >>> >>> ** >>> >>> ⁃This document does not define a protocol, so the words "_the >protocol >>> to be used for" _should be removed. >> Gorry, on this point, I made the original suggestion to call this a >> protocol document during the -13 review (email to the list on March >7); >> please see below my original comment regarding this. >> >> - Tom >> Explicit Congestion Notification >> > (ECN) Protocol for Ultra-Low Queuing Delay (L4S) >> >> > >> > Title >> > >> > The title of this draft suggests that the scope is narrowly >defining >> > the identifier of L4S semantics, but the draft covers much more >than >> > this; in fact, it perhaps it could more accurately be described >as an >> > L4S protocol specification. At the end of the abstract, the >draft >> > states "This specification defines the rules that L4S transports >and >> > network elements need to follow...", i.e. a protocol. It also >gets >> > into operational considerations and open questions for >experimentation. >> > >> > Perhaps a broader title such as "" would better match >> > the contents. >> -- Sent from my Android device with K-9 Mail. Please excuse my brevity.
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