Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID (27. Appx B & C)

[Gorry Fairhurst <[e-mail]>]

On 14/05/2021 16:09, Bob Briscoe wrote:
> Chairs, Martin,
> See [BB]
>
ACK.

That seems like a good plan, and was what we discussed.

Gorry

> On 06/05/2021 07:52, Gorry Fairhurst wrote:
>>
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>> *27. Appendix B and C
>> *
>> ⁃Appendix B is lengthy, at best loosely connected with the rest of 
>> the draft, definitely out of date, and not aligned with current WG 
>> views of this area. This appendix can be removed prior to 
>> publication. Appendix C is unecessary to the final publication.
>> =================================================================
>
> [BB] Offlist discussion with the chairs and Martin has come up with 
> the solution of deleting the sub-sections of these appendices that are 
> not referenced from the rest of the draft, but keeping those that are.
>
> B.1 is referenced from the body of the draft a couple of times, 
> because it's the pros and cons of the chosen scheme.
> C.1 is referenced from the security considerations.
>
> So I'm planning on promoting B.1 to B, and C.1 to C.
> But I'll take out the remainder of B and C, and change the 
> introductory context of each.
>
> For reference, here's the end of the ToC as it stands before the 
> proposed edits:
>
>    Appendix B  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B>.  Alternative Identifiers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .46  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-46>
>       B.1  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.1>.  ECT(1) and CE codepoints  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .47  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-47>
>       B.2  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.2>.  ECN-DualQ-SCE1  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .51  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-51>
>       B.3  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.3>.  ECN-DualQ-SCE0  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .54  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-54>
>       B.4  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.4>.  ECN Plus a Diffserv Codepoint (DSCP)  . . . . . . . . . .56  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-56>
>       B.5  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.5>.  ECN capability alone  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .58  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-58>
>       B.6  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.6>.  Protocol ID . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .58  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-58>
>       B.7  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.7>.  Source or destination addressing  . . . . . . . . . . . .59  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-59>
>       B.8  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-B.8>.  Summary: Merits of Alternative Identifiers  . . . . . . .59  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-59>
>     Appendix C  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-C>.  Potential Competing Uses for the ECT(1) Codepoint  .  60
>       C.1  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-C.1>.  Integrity of Congestion Feedback  . . . . . . . . . . . .60  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-60>
>       C.2  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#appendix-C.2>.  Notification of Less Severe Congestion than CE  . . . . .61  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id#page-61>
>
>
> Bob
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