Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID

Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> Thu, 13 May 2021 17:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID
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Gorry, (and David and Wes I believe)

Thank you for the extremely diligent review.
Those points that can just be accepted will be, without comment.
Otherwise, you will now start to see responses to them on the list. I'll 
try to group them to minimize confusion, and I'll add the item no's. in 
the subject line.


Bob


On 06/05/2021 07:52, Gorry Fairhurst wrote:
>
> Here are some review comments on a careful read of the L4S ID that I 
> hope will help in preparation of a new revision of the draft. More 
> details have been sent to the authors.
>
>
> Best wishes,
>
>
> Gorry
>
>

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