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Re: [ipwave] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - sequencing the LL and SLAAC sections closer

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Mon, 08 April 2019 13:05 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - sequencing the LL and SLAAC sections closer
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WFM

All the best,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>
> Sent: lundi 8 avril 2019 17:52
> To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com>
> Cc: int-dir@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; its@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-
> 80211ocb.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 -
> sequencing the LL and SLAAC sections closer
> 
> 
> Le 04/03/2019 à 12:24, Pascal Thubert a écrit :
> > Reviewer: Pascal Thubert
> > Review result: Not Ready
> >
> [...]
> > Could you make sections 4.3 and 4.5 contiguous?
> 
> I would re-order them, if you dont mind.
> 
> Alex

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