[Ianaplan] A draft for your review

[Eliot Lear <[e-mail]>]

Dear colleagues,

I have posted a -00 draft that seeks to respond to the most current
version of the RFP I could get my hands on.  Would you kindly provide
some thoughts about it?  I am most particularly concerned about
substance at the moment.  The sorts of things I'm looking for are these:

  * Is the text in the "IETF Response" accurate and in fact responsive
    to the question?
  * Is there anything missing?
  * Is there anything that does not parse well?  Did you think "Huh??"
    when you read a sentence?

My intent is to have a second version out prior to the cutoff for the
Honolulu meeting as a candidate for the IANAPLAN working group to adopt,
assuming the working group is chartered.

Kind thanks to Russ Housley and the members of the IAB IANA Strategy
Program for their very helpful contributions.  I've indicated myself and
Russ as editors, because we have not been the only ones to insert text
on this.

Eliot
ps: I am aware that the formatting could stand some improvement.  I will
work on that for the next version.

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A new version of I-D, draft-lear-iana-icg-response-00.txt
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Name:		draft-lear-iana-icg-response
Revision:	00
Title:		Draft Response to the Internet Coordination Group Request for Proposals on IANA
Document date:	2014-08-30
Group:		Individual Submission
Pages:		17
URL:            http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-lear-iana-icg-response-00.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lear-iana-icg-response/
Htmlized:       http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-lear-iana-icg-response-00


Abstract:
   This document contains the a draft response to a request for
   proposals from the IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group
   regarding the protocol parameters registries.  It is meant to be
   included in an aggregate proposal that also includes contributions
   covering names and addresses that will be submitted from their
   respective operational communities.  The IETF community is invited to
   comment and propose changes to this document.

                                                                                  


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