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Re: [Ianaplan] A draft for your review

"Martin J. Dürst" <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp> Sat, 25 October 2014 00:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ianaplan] A draft for your review
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> At 05:50 24-10-2014, Suzanne Woolf wrote:

>> Eliot's language could stand some tinkering, but I can live with it.
>> Since I owe him text on another point, I'll suggest while I'm here the
>> following revision:
>>
>> "It is important to note that the IETF includes anyone who wishes to
>> participate, including staff or other participants from ICANN or the
>> Regional Internet Registries (RIRs), and people affiliated with those
>> organizations regularly do."

The switch of direction between the first clause (IETF includes) and the 
last one (people do) is still there, and causing confusion. Please fix, 
thanks!

Regards,   Martin.

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